Wednesday, February 3, 2010

poem 1

I don't have a title for it andd it's just a rough draft sooo here it is:

in a field of sorrow death and despair you stand

with your arms stretched out holding your precious little flower

you shield and protect it from the harm below

and watch it grow right in front of your eyes

awe and amazement fill you as the beauty matures and the colors become more vibrant

do not blink, be careful, and head my warning

the smallest mistake can cause you a lifetime of misery

and your precious little flower will be drawn to the ground


there is suddenly a burst of wind and your perspective changes

shock fills your mind as you wonder how you couldn’t have seen this before

what is it that you are looking at in your hand?

it looks and feels and acts like your precious little flower

but there is something wrong about it

your flower looks faded and worn, not healthy and lonely

you don’t approve and tell it to look right again but it droops even lower

you start to lose hope


you feel the flower slipping away from you

but you can’t bear to see it go

embarrassment and distrust set in

and you don’t look at your flower the same way again

one day, as if your hands become translucent, the flower slips right through

there is nothing you can do to catch it

and at that moment you decide to blink

and the second you open your eyes, you catch sight of that flower

it looks just as pretty the first time you laid eyes on it

and you realize it had been your vision and thoughts

that made your precious little flower be dropped

in the field of sorrow, death, and despair where you stand